[url=http://1190.bicyclesonthemoon.info/aftertime/viewer?story=advent&f=5][img]http://1190.bicyclesonthemoon.info/aftertime/advent/advent-05.png[/img][/url] [center]~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [b]Less, much less by Moniza Alvi[/b]
He hardly spoke any words only two — or you could call it one
the last thing he said was bye-bye
flight-feathers veined and hairlike with interlocking barbules
of sound the bye-bye trapped a breath of air
the two linked words drifted out on a calm lake
that lay there with a single purpose — to receive final words
and allow them to drift on its surface out and further out
on the lake of thought and composure encircled by mountains
the simple phrase soared upwards to the highest peak
where it would be planted like a flag would eventually be enshrined
each identical word carefully balanced either side of the invisible join —
like baby talk he put equal emphasis on each word
his face was pinched and his bird beak very prominent
there have never been two joined words with so much space around them
pack up all my cares and woes light the light I’ll arrive late tonight
blackbird bye bye
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